Active vs. Passive

1. Introduction

We prioritize using active voice because it aligns with our values of transparency, hospitality, and accountability. Active voice not only enhances clarity but also allows us to take responsibility for our actions and interactions with our customers. Here’s a deeper dive into why we prefer active voice and when passive voice might be appropriate.

2. Why do we use active voice?

2.1. Clarity and directness

Active voice places the subject of the sentence in a clear, prominent position. The “doer” comes before the verb, making it immediately apparent who is responsible for the action. This structure eliminates ambiguity and ensures our message is straightforward and easy to understand.

Best practice
Active voice: “Our mobile app” is the subject performing the action.

2.2. Accountability and trust

Using active voice demonstrates that we are taking responsibility for our actions, reinforcing our commitment to reliability and trustworthiness. It shows that we are accountable and open with our customers, which is a key aspect of our brand’s hospitality.

Best practice
Active voice: “We” indicates who completed the action, reflecting responsibility.

2.3. Engagement and energy

Active voice is inherently more dynamic and engaging. It captures the reader’s attention and creates a more conversational and friendly tone, which is essential for building strong customer relationships.

Best practice
Active voice: “Our special services” actively contribute to a positive customer experience.

3. Scenarios where you should use passive voice

While active voice is our default, there are certain scenarios where passive voice is more appropriate:


3.1. Emphasizing the action over the doer

When the focus should be on the action itself rather than who performed it, passive voice can be useful. This is often the case when the “doer” is unknown or irrelevant to the message.

Best practice
Passive voice: The emphasis is on the different fees, not who get the money.

3.2. Maintaining formality and objectivity

In certain contexts, such as legal or formal communications, passive voice can add a level of objectivity or neutrality that active voice may not provide.

Best practice
Example: Terms and conditions are subject to change.
(Passive voice: Provides a formal tone without assigning direct agency.)

3.3. Customer-centric language

When the experience or result for the customer is more important than who performed the action, passive voice can appropriately shift focus to the customer’s experience.

Best practice
Passive voice: Emphasizes the action taken on behalf of the customer’s input.

3.4. Error messages

Writing all error messages in an active tone can sometimes come off as accusatory or harsh, which may frustrate users. Don’t hesitate to use passive voice when appropriate. It can help maintain a friendly and professional tone, especially in sensitive situations.

Not like this
Feels like we’re blaming them: Directly points out the user’s mistake. Sounds accusatory and frustrating.
Like this
Explain the situation: Focuses on the action and provides a clear solution without blaming the user.